高分应用文突破系列--申请信

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高分应用文突破系列--申请信：高分应用文突破系列--申请信

● PART 1申请信写作技巧

1.申请信六件套:

首段:自我介绍＋背景目的

主体:性格能力＋申请理由

尾段:重申渴望＋感谢回复

2.“申清”句式

2019年全国卷

假定你是李华,暑期在伦敦学习,得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展览.请写一封信申请做志愿者,内容包括: 1.写信目的: 2.个人优势 3.能做的事情。

注意:1.词数100左右; 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯; 3.结束语已为你写好。

▲首段:自我介绍+背景目的

构思:我是李华。我是一个17岁的男孩。我正在伦敦读书。

基础版: l am Li Hua. l am a 17-year-old boy. I am studying in London.

我是李华。我是一个17岁的男孩。我正在红星中学读书。

基础版:l am Li Hua. l am a 17-year-old boy. l am studying in Hongxing High School.

★升级版:

我是…，一个…，正在…读书。

l am Li Hua (姓名), a 17-year-old boy (年龄), _________________ in Hongxing

High School (学校).

l am Li Hua(姓名),a Senior 3 student (身份),presently/currently studying in

Hongxing High School(学校).

我是李华,一个高三的学生,现在生活在杭州。

I'm Li Hua, a senior 3 student, presently ____________in Beijing.

1. live B. lived C. living http://D.am living

▲首段:自我介绍+背景目的

构思:我在网上听闻你们要举办国画展.我想要成为志愿者。

基础版: I read the news on the Internet.

You will hold a show.

l am very interested in it.

★升级版1: __________ the news on the website _________

you will hold an exhibition of Chinese paintings

in your art gallery,I'm writing to _________ to be

a volunteer.

Having learned the news on the website that an exhibition

of Chinese paintings will be held in your art gallery,

I'm writing to apply to be a volunteer.

★词汇升级 : news →announcement / advertisement / post

want to →am eager to / desire to join → participate in

★升级版2: Having learned the announcement on the website that an exhibition of Chinese paintings will be held in your art gallery,I'm writing to apply to be a volunteer.

Having learned the _______________ on the website _________an exhibition of Chinese paintings will be held in your art gallery,I'm ___________ to ______________ it.

★升级版3:

Your announcement on the website / in the newspaper / on TV that you will hold an exhibition of Chinese paintings in your art gallery ___________ me _____ much _______ 1 couldn't _______ to participate in it.

2022年冬奥会将在杭州举办,目前在全国招募志愿者,假如你是李华,你希望成为一名杭州冬奥会志愿者。请根据以下提示给组委会写封英文申请信:

1.个人情况:年龄、性别、就读情况; 2.个人条件:英语好、爱好运动、善于交际、熟悉

当地情况;3.承诺:提供最佳服务。

下列选项中正确的是

我在网站上看到你们发布的公告说要招募冬季奥运会志愿者,我写信想申请成为

志愿者中的一员。

____________________volunteers are wanted for the Winter Olympics,I'm writing to

apply to be one of them.

A.Having read your announcement on the website which

B.Having read your announcement on the website that

C.Read your announcement on the website which

D.Read your announcement on the website that

假设你是红星中学高二(1 )班的学生李华,下个月英国Saint Gorge High School的

交换学生要来你校学习,学校为此招募接待家庭。请你根据以下信息，提出申

请并说明理由。

1.家里住宿条件好; 2.英语听说能力强; 3.了解英国人的文化习俗。

你们在网站上利登的招募交换生接待家庭公告非常吸引人,给我留下了如此

深刻的印象,以至于我迫不及待地想加人。

___________________________you are going to recruit some host families for

exchange students ___________________I couldn't wait to join you.

▲首段:自我介绍+背景目的

L am Li Hua , a 17-year-old boy, ____________ ….

I am Li Hua , a Senior 3 student, ___________….

★升级版1:

Having learned the news on the website that you will hold an exhibition of

Chinese paintings in your art gallery,I'm writing to apply to be a volunteer.

★升级版2:

Having learned the ________________ on the website ________ an exhibition of

Chinese paintings will be held in your art gallery,_________________.

★升级版3:

Your ____________on the website / in the newspaper / on TV ______you will

hold an exhibition of Chinese paintings in your art gallery _____________

I couldn't wait to participate in it.

▲主体:性格能力+申请理由

构思:我人很好,擅长交友。

基础版: I am a friendly and nice person. I can get on well with others easily!

★升级版1: ___________________, I can get on well with others easily.

★升级版2:I ____________________ 性格nature , 我性格好

which helps me.... 这帮助我做事

which makes it possible for me to ... 这使我能做事

which is considered indispensable for ... 被认为是做事必不可少的。

词汇升级

乐观的 optimistic

精力充沛的 energetic

可靠的 reliable

热情的 enthusiastic/passionate

有上进心的 ambitious

外向的 outgoing

有积极性的 motivated

有责任心的 responsible

客易相处的 easygoing

2018年6月浙江卷)

假定你是李华，你校英语协会招聘志愿者，接待来访的国外中学生。请你写信应聘，内容包括:

1.口语能力; 2.相关经验; 3.应聘目的。

下列选项中正确的是

我的性格热情开朗,曾代表学校参加过很多国际文化交流活动。

____________many international cultural exchange activities on behalf of our school.

http://A.Am enthusiastic and optimistic,I have participated in

B.An enthusiastic and optimistic,and I have participated in

C.Enthusiastic and optimistic, I have participated in

D.Enthusiastic and optimistic,and I have participated in

假定你是李华，暑期在伦敦学习，得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展。请写

一封信申请做志愿者，内容包括:1.写信目的;2.个人优势;3.能做的事情。

我性格积极乐观,这对于志愿者工作来说是必不可少的。

l own a motivated and optimistic nature,__________ indispensable for

volunteer work.

1. which is considering
2. which is considered
3. that is considered
4. that is considering

▲主体:性格能力+申请理由

构思:我英语好,擅长交流。

基础版: My English is good, so I can talk with others.

★升级版1: I ___________English ,__________ helps me

communicate with others __________/ which makes _____

possible for me to communicate with others fluently/

which is considered __________ for daily communication.

词汇升级

有能力be capable of sth

擅长excel in sth /specialized in sth

精通have a good knowledge of /have a good command of /be well versed in sth

构思:我英语好，得过一等奖。

★升级版:

l always _______ in oral English, as a result, I have won the first place

in the English speaking contest ______ by my school.

构思:我能让外国人了解中国，感受中国文化。

基础版:

l can show Chinese culture, and let them know Chinese culture.

★升级版1: Not only can I ..., but also ... = characteristics

Not only can I make foreigners understand the ______ of Chinese paintings

___________ my introduction , but also I can let them feel the ___________

Chinese culture.

经过我的辅导,不仅可以帮你提高普通话水平,还可以带你了解更多

关于中国习俗和文化。(多选).

_________help you improve your Mandarin through my tutoring,

but also make you learn more about Chinese customs and culture.

A.Can I not only

B. I can not only

C. Not only I can

D. Not only can l

( 2018年6月浙江卷)

假定你是李华,你校英语协会招聘志愿者,接待来访的国外中学生。

请你写信应聘，内容包括:1.口语能力; 2.相关经验; 3.应聘目的。

我的口语很流利,因此我多次在学校举办的口语大赛中获得一等奖.

下列句子翻译正确的是(多选).

1. Well versed in oral English, l have won the first prize
   in the Spoken English competition held by our school
   for several times.
2. Excel in oral English, I have won the first prize in the
   Spoken English competition held by our school for
   several times.
3. I capable of speaking English, which has won me the
   first prize in the Spoken English Competition for several
   times.
4. Having a good command of spoken English, I have
   won the first prize in the Spoken English Competition
   held by our school before.
   ▲尾段:重申渴望+感谢回复
   构思:我希望能得到这个工作。谢谢啊。
   基础版: l hope I can get this position at last.
   ★升级版: I would appreciate it if you could give me the opportunity to join as a
   volunteer. = consider my application.
   词汇升级
   consider my application → take my sincere application into consideration
   l would appreciate it if you could take my sincere application into consideration.
   ▲尾段:重申渴望+感谢回复
   构思:期待你的回信。
   基础版:I am looking forward to your reply.
   ★升级版: I shall feel _____________ by a reply at your earliest convenience.
   Your ____________ reply would be _____________ appreciated.
   ▲尾段:重申渴望+感谢回复
   l would appreciate it if you could ____ my ______ application
   _________. I shall feel ________ by a reply _____ your earliest
   convenience/Your ______ reply would be _______ appreciated.
   全文欣赏：
   I am Li Hua,a 17-year-old boy, presently/currently studying in
   London this summer vacation. Having learned the announcement
   on the website that you will hold an exhibition of Chinese paintings
   in your art gallery, I'm writing to apply to be a volunteer.
   Friendly as well as easygoing,I can get on well with others
   easily.I have a good command of English,which makes it possible
   for me to communicate with others fluently. Not only can I make
   foreigners understand the features of Chinese paintings through
   my introduction,but also I can let them feel the great Chinese culture.
   I would appreciate it if you could take my sincere application
   into consideration. Your prompt reply would be highly appreciated.
   ● PART 2申请信篇章训练
   (2021年杭州市第八中学月考卷)
   假定你是李华，从网上得知一个国际中学生组织将在中国举办冬令营，欢迎各国学生参加。请写一封邮件申请参加。内容包括: 1.自我介绍; 2.参加目的;3.希望成功。
   ▲首段:自我介绍
   l am Li Hua, presently studying in Hongxing High School.
   ▲背景+目的
   _______________________the news from the website that a winter camp will be held by a world-renowned International High School Association, I'm writing to participate in this event.
   下列选项中翻译正确的是____________
   我是李华,一个对旅行和结识朋友特别感兴趣的高中生。
1. Tm Li Hua, a senior high student who have a particular interest in travelling,nd making friends.

B.I'm Li Hua, a senior high student who have a particular interest in travel and make friends.

C. I'm Li Hua, a senior high student who has a particular interest in travelling and making friends.

D. I'm Li Hua, a senior high student who has a particular interest in travel and make friends.

你们在网站上的公告说一个非常有名的国际高中协会将在我的祖国举行冬令营,这让我印象如此深刻,以至于我迫不及待地想要加入.

_____________________________________a winter camp is to be held in our

motherland by a world renowned International High School Association

_______________________________________.

▲主体:性格能力＋申请理由

___________________(熟练掌握) English allows me to participate in various contests and activities ____________（在国内外) , making me a more competitive individual.

▲主体:性格能力＋申请理由

What's more, _______________ (我很自信且心胸开阔) ,which helps me make friends

from other cultural backgrounds quickly.

▲主体:性格能力＋申请理由

Meanwhile,I _____________(我对中国文化有浓厚的兴趣) Chinese culture,

_____________________(使得我可以) share with foreign friends about the

classics, the folk art,the traditional crafts etc.

▲主体:性格能力＋申请理由

Having an excellent command of English allows me to participate in

various contests and activities both at home and abroad, making me a

more competitive individual. What's more,I have a confident and

broad-minded nature,which helps me make friends from other cultural

backgrounds quickly. Meanwhile,I have a keen interest in Chinese

culture,making it possible for me to share with foreign friends about

the classics, the folk art, the traditional crafts etc.

▲尾段:重申渴望+感谢回复

I __________(我将不胜感激）if you could give me the opportunity

to join in the camp.I'm looking forward to your early reply.

如果您能考虑我诚挚的申请，我会非常感激的。一旦被录取，我会更加乐意努力学习提升自己的成绩。(多选题)

__________________________________Once accepted, I will be more than delighted to work harder for my academic performance.

1. I would appreciate if you could take my sincere application into account
2. I would appreciate it if you could take my sincere application into account

C. I would appreciate if you could take my sincere application into consideration.

D. I would appreciate it if you could take my sincere application into consideration.

全文欣赏：

l am Li Hua,presently studying in Hongxing High School. Having learned the news from the website that a winter camp will be held by an International High School Association,I'm writing to participate in this event.

Having an excellent command of English allows me to participate in various contests and activities, making me a more competitive individual.What's more,I have a confident and broad-minded nature, which helps me make friends from other cultural backgrounds quickly. Meanwhile,I love Chinese culture, making it possible for me to share with foreign friends about the classics and traditional crafts.

I would appreciate it if you could give me the opportunity to join in the camp.I'm looking forward to your reply.

●实战演练

1.假定你是李华,暑假在伦敦学习,得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展,请写一封信申请做志愿者，内容包括：1.写信目的； 2.个人优势； 3.能做的事情。

注意：1.写作词数应为80左右； 2.开头及结束语已写好。

2.假定你是李华，你和另一个学生是合住一间宿舍的常住生。你发现无法忍受室友的一些行为，请给宿舍管理员写一封信，申请下学期更换房间。

内容包括：(1)提出换房要求 (2)阐述具体原因。 注意：字数80左右。

3.假定你是李华，打算应聘你校学生英语报Youth的Growing Up Stories栏目的编辑，请用英语写一封应聘信，内容包括：1.对栏目的理解； 2.个人优势。

注意：1.写作词汇应为80左右; 2.请按如下格式在答案卡的相应位置作答。

4.假定你是李华，暑假在伦敦学习，得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展览。请写一封信申请做志愿者，内容包括：1. 写信目的； 2. 个人优势；3. 能做的事情。

注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 结束语已为你写好。

5.假定你是高三学生李华，你校正在组织由外教Mr. Smith选拔两名同学参加英国牛津大

学(University of Oxford)的冬令营。请你给外教Mr. Smith发一封邮件申请参加。

内容包括：1.自我介绍；2.申请理由；3.期待获准。

注意：1.词数80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。